Essay Comments

I am happy with the way my essay came out and I am proud that I was able to successfully communicate my main point and provide clear and strong analysis to support it. But the biggest area that I need to work on and improve is definitely when it comes to revision. After finishing an essay I don't spend enough time looking over it and checking for the small grammatical and syntactic mistakes and sometimes, even when I do re-read over an essay multiple times, I don't even notice the mistakes and small errors. That's why I think the best feedback I got was the suggestion that I should have someone else read over my essay before I turn it in. This would really help me because someone else who is reading my essay would be more likely to catch the mistakes that I missed.