Essay Comments

The comments on my essay stated that my strengths were definitely in my insight, reasoning and my tendency to think and analyze. I take pride in these qualities because I think that they are very important aspects of creating a strong essay. My weaknesses were in my wording and sentence structure. I know these are things I can improve and work on by writing more and also revising my essays more. So I plan on refining both of those aspects and similar ones for my next essay.