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Sample Student Essays

I read sample essays A,B and C. I liked essay B "Its All About the First Impressions: How Austen and Greene Introduce Characters" the most because unlike essay A which I thought had a very shallow thesis, the writer of essay B completely analyzed their topic and created a very precise and in depth thesis that also struck the interest of the reader (me). And since the writer had so clearly outlined their ideas in the thesis, the essay was very well organized and each paragraph was analytical and detailed. I thought overall it was a well developed essay.

2 comments:

  1. Good point about the thesis setting up your whole reading experience, Stefana!

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  2. P.S. You might choose a white font to go on the black background. Unless you want to keep the mysteriousness of your blog design!

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