Sample Student Essays #3

Today I read essays G,H and I. I have to be honest.. I didn't like any of them. G was completely over simplified, H doesn't have a specific idea or topic, and I just didn't really make sense to me. But if I had to chose one of them to get the highest grade it would be I because even though I didn't quite understand the main point the author was trying to make, he/she at least had a developed idea that they elaborated on and analyzed in their essay unlike the authors of G and H.